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Monday, June 23, 2014

Creator Owned Script Sampling

PAGE TWENTY – 6 panels

Panel 1: Okay, the entire page is a purple outline of Dusty’s body. Within his body, we have the different panels.

So...for this panel we have a ground shot of Dusty resting on his side, helpless and utterly cute.

(no dialogue)

Panel 2: Same shot but Kitsune is kneeling, scooping him up.

SOUNDFX: scoop

Panel 3: Over Kitsune’s shoulder, looking down into her cupped hands. Dusty’s eyes are big and pitiful and black.

KITSUNE: WHAT…

KITSUNE: ARE YOU?

Panel 4: Dusty’s eyes suddenly change into Kitsune’s.

SOUNDFX: XHHOON

Panel 5: Cut to Kitsune’s eyes--they turn completely black (like Dusty’s). Her face looks like she’s mesmerized.

KITSUNE: HTH!

Panel 6: Close in on Kitsune’s black eye. We see Dusty’s purple outline in the black. We know it’s her eye b/c of the fur surrounding it and her eyelashes.

(no dialogue)

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